This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we
had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is that I have good ideas.
had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is that I have good ideas.
I need to improve on adding better adjectives and making sure I use fullstops and capital letters.
Hot air balloon
My hot air balloon is red and white.
If I win I want to go to New York . I will need a sleeping bag,
some apples, a pack of oranges,clothes,some chips and lots and lots
of water. When the hot air balloon landed I felt so so so so so so
excited because I could see a pretty house that comes with a
swimming pool. I won the race so I went and bought the house
If I win I want to go to New York . I will need a sleeping bag,
some apples, a pack of oranges,clothes,some chips and lots and lots
of water. When the hot air balloon landed I felt so so so so so so
excited because I could see a pretty house that comes with a
swimming pool. I won the race so I went and bought the house
I first saw.When I got to my new house it was lovely there. Jayme,
Cruz and Kaira will be staying with me. I can’t wait .
Cruz and Kaira will be staying with me. I can’t wait .
I did win in my hot air balloon.
ReplyDeleteI love school because we get to learn about our hot air balloon.By Sienna b 🎈